When A Door Closes And Other Cowboy Wisdom

I’m benched. I injured my hip and I’m in a fair amount of pain which probably colored my flash fiction today in more ways than one.

My Dad was a pickup truck driving Montana cowboy. As a young man he made his meager living as a wrangler and he was a gifted horse whisperer. I grew up riding but truth be told, I was afraid to jump. I was raised on his optimism and cowboy wisdom. I could use a little of his optimism today.

Lauren Moscato
This weeks photo prompt comes from Lauren Moscato.
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When a Door Closes and Other Cowboy Wisdom

“Trust your mount”
Remembering my Dad’s cowboy wisdom I swallowed my fear and gave her a light rein, confident in her cadence and timing.
My gaze was in the middle distance.
“You won’t clear the fence if you’re looking at it.”
I felt the mare gather her hind quarters and we took flight. I sensed her hesitation before the rail clipped her forearm.
“Always keep your heels down.”
My boot caught in the stirrup and we fell, shattering my dreams along with my femur.

“I know Dad” I rolled my eyes, “when a door closes, God opens a window.”
“Nope, I was gonna say that some doors lead to no where. Let’s retire that English saddle.”

58 responses to “When A Door Closes And Other Cowboy Wisdom

  1. Sorry you hurt your hip and hope you feel better soon. Words of wisdom are always welcome.

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  2. Yes, do feel better soon. Thinking of dad should help.

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  3. That was wonderful! I’m not exactly sure what an English saddle looks like but I have a good idea. LOL! I sure hope the mare wasn’t hurt when she missed the jump. I’m sorry you were hurt (even if it’s fiction). 😀

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  4. I hope you are feeling better! I grew up with horses too and am probably lucky that I could bounce a bit better then than now.

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  5. Best wishes for a speedy recovery! 🙂

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  6. Never trust a man who uses platitudes!
    Good piece.

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    • Actually Mick, my Dad usually cloaked his advice in short stories with a moral nugget hidden inside. I think that comes from the Irish. I on the other hand am guilty as charged today. Platitudes are all over this post. Time heals all wounds. Ha ha

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  7. Nice story, Tracey. Sorry about your hip, and hope you’re soon feeling better.

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  8. Dear Tracey,

    You have a knack for picking details from the prompt and never taking the obvious direction. For that you’ve won my heart.

    I add my best wishes and platitudes for a speedy recovery.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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  9. Great story! I’d quite like to try riding one day (just trotting along, nothing fancy) but I’m pretty sure I’d never want to jump.
    Hope your hip gets better soon.

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  10. Now if you can write so well in pain…Imagine the possibilities when the pain is gone….Good one! Hope you feel better soon!
    I was just talking about my Dad, this morning ,to my son…and reminiscing about his quirks and how i have inherited some of them…and the first post on my reader was yours and the anecdote about your optimistic Dad….Go on inherit all of his optimism..

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  11. The acorn doesn’t fall very far from the tree.
    My sons were so lucky to have my parents in their lives. I miss my Dad’s advice even though I poke fun at it.
    Tracey

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  12. I like the final statement by Dad. Great use of the prompt. Heal quickly Alicia

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  13. Sorry to hear about your hip, but wishing you a speedy recovery!

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  14. hey doc, get well soon! anyway, i truly enjoyed reading your story this week.

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  15. I find myself quoting my father quite often. I’m glad you felt well enough to write and to share your father’s wisdom with us. Heal quickly, my friend.

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  16. Great post! Sounds about like my last experience riding English. Give me Western any day. I hope you’re hip is on the mend!

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  17. The dad saw clearly, very wise. I hope you get well soon.

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  18. Unique take on the prompt. Love the dad’s saying at the end. Hope your hip is feeling better.

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  19. I read so much double-entendre into this story. Surely not the writing; I’m just a sad, sick man.

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    • Dave,
      Sick as in ill or sick as in twisted? Either way, I’m surprised you could see a double entendre through the cliches. I wrote while in pain so who knows anything is possible.
      Tracey

      I went back and read my piece after your comment and yes I see your point. Ooo I just don’t think like that but thanks for burning that image into my brain. 😉

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  20. I hope you feel better soon xx

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  21. I’m afraid sometimes something closes and nothing opens in return. Hope you’re feeling better soon, Tracey!

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  22. Uh-oh – is your hip hurting that much? My sympathies – I had mine replaced years ago.

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  23. Tracey, I love all the details in this. I didn’t know there was a difference between English and a Western saddles. Your dad has wise words. I hope your hip feels better quick.

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    • Amy,
      It’s never the saddle’s fault when you fall. A good rider can hold her seat on any saddle. He was just telling me to stop jumping which is usually done in an English saddle. I can ride both but I prefer a western saddle. Actually I prefer standing on terra firma. The last time I was thrown, the ground was very hard and I don’t bounce any more.
      Thank you,
      Tracey

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  24. Dear Tracey,

    You see?

    Look at all the comments above mine and smile. You may not bounce any longer and you may be down and semi-out for a bit, but do not doubt that it is temporary and that you have a gift for writing.

    Question: Should it be foreleg as opposed to forearm? I don’t know and am not asking Google.

    How was your flight back from Maui? Did you bang your hip on a palm tree?

    Aloha,

    Doug

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    • Hi Doug,
      Forearm, because the actual muscles are named the same as human arm muscles in the front and leg muscles in the back as if the horse were standing. However foreleg does convey the point better if I’m not addressing a veterinarian. I’ll keep the reader’s perspective in mind and not over think it. Good call.
      Surfing accident on the North Shore!
      Actually I injured it in ballet class. (Stop laughing)
      Mahalo,
      Tracey

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  25. Sorry to hear about your hip! I wish you a fast recovery! No fun when you health is not 100% for what ever reason it may be.

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  26. What a wonderful response to the picture. Sad that it ended in a closed door for the rider, but maybe deep down she’s relieved about that. I love the details of the jump, and the fall – brings it alive.

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  27. I love the back story here, and the gentle reflection of your father-daughter relationship. Lovely.

    Hope you’re feeling better soon!

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  28. I enjoyed the story. I agree with the dad. That English saddle needs to go. A little late for the leg though. Well done, 🙂 — Suzanne

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